Talk:Settle Down (No Doubt song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 04:58, 19 May 2016 (UTC)

Hello, I'm Cartoon network freak, and here's my review to your GAN:


 * Lead
 * a song by -> a song recorded by
 * Spike Stent, it was -> Spike Stent, the track was; you've already used "it"
 * 2012 by -> 2012 through
 * Remove "Latin and Caribbean-tinged beats" -> it is no genre and it doesn't fit togethr with the other content
 * Lyrically, the song -> Lyrically, "Settle Down"; you've already used "song"
 * about confidence and about feeling good, adjusting yourself to unfamiliar circumstances -> about confidence and feeling good, with one of its subtopics being familiar circumstances
 * other songs -> other recordings; you've already used "song"
 * Some critics -> Some reviewers; you've already used "critics"
 * fifth album Rock Steady, -> fifth studio album, Rock Steady (2001),
 * Remove "particularly"
 * Santigold songs -> the works of Santigold
 * July 16, 2012. In it, -> July 16, 2012, which portrays
 * convoy, which -> convoy that
 * to perform the song -> to perform "Settle Down"
 * It received -> The clip received
 * praising the -> praising its
 * lights and -> lights, and
 * to do -> to shoot


 * Background and release
 * album Rock Steady -> album, Rock Steady
 * hiatus to take a break to -> hiatus, in order to
 * add year of the compilation in ""
 * The main reason to go into hiatus was that, in early 2003, their lead singer Gwen Stefani started work on her 1980s-inspired new wave/dance-pop music side project, under which she has released two solo albums — Love. Angel. Music. Baby. on November 23, 2004 and The Sweet Escape on December 5, 2006 ->The main reason the band took a break from their music career was of Gwen Stefani's solo work; she had released two albums — Love. Angel. Music. Baby. (2004) and The Sweet Escape (2006).
 * Remove "successful"; fancruft
 * began initial work -> commenced work
 * 2008, after Gwen Stefani wrapped the tour behind her second solo album, The Sweet Escape. -> 2008, following Stefani's promotional tour of her second solo record.
 * This section is too excesively about the album; try to short it out

I've reviewed a select few sections, but as you can see, there are a substantial amount of basic errors. However, I think the first step would be to request the article be copy-edited, and then even request someone to help you improve the article (however, I'd discourage asking me as I'd quite like to re-review this when it's been worked on, and if I've worked on it, I can't review it!) Best of luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 10:28, 22 May 2016 (UTC)
 * Outcome