Talk:Severn bore/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 14:15, 1 September 2016 (UTC)

Will do this soon. JAG UAR   14:15, 1 September 2016 (UTC)


 * "on the tidal reaches of the River Severn in England" - I think it would be good to mention "southern England"
 * The lead is perfect
 * "exceeded only by the Bay of Fundy" - you should mention that the Bay of Fundy is in Canada (and USA?)
 * "at about 700 mph" convert to kmh too
 * "decreases to about 200 mph" - same here
 * "a segment of the wave has to accommodates to the ever-decreasing width" - no plural needed
 * " and its height is nearly fifty feet" - this should be read out as 50 ft
 * " with the largest bores occurring between 9 and 11" - 9 and 11 pm or am?
 * "about two feet of fresh water below Gloucester" - 2 ft
 * " because the wave is travelling faster than the wave speed in water above the Bore (see tidal bore for more details)" - why is bore capitalised here?
 * "One of the main viewpoints is at Minsterworth at the Severn Bore Inn on the A48" - link A48 road
 * "The river was first surfed in 1955 by WWII veteran Jack Churchill" - World War II
 * The fourth and third paragraphs in the Transport and surfing section should be switched around and merged, so that they're in chronological order
 * Ref 8 is dead

Very decent all around, well written and sourced. Naturally I didn't check the ones I can't access. On hold. JAG UAR   14:53, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you for taking on this review. I have dealt with all the things you mention above. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 17:37, 1 September 2016 (UTC)
 * Passed. I'm sure Fram will be thrilled! ;-D  JAG  UAR   18:44, 1 September 2016 (UTC)