Talk:Sex141

Introduction
...an unnamed US officials privately... Please clarify if this means "...an unnamed US official privately..." (the more likely) or "...unnamed US officials privately..." I didn't want to risk changing it myself to the wrong one. Dick Kimball (talk) 12:37, 6 January 2014 (UTC)

December 2013 raids
... in Hong Kong, Kowloon and the New Territories."

Hong Kong consists of three main regions: Hong Kong Island, the New Territories, and the Kowloon Peninsula. This might be clearer if it read, "...in all three main regions of Hong Kong: Hong Kong Island, the Kowloon Peninsula, and the New Territories." Dick Kimball (talk) 13:01, 6 January 2014 (UTC)