Talk:Sex Industry Network

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Is it me or does this sound like it was cut and pasted from a brochure? -Postcard Cathy (talk)


 * Postcard Cathy Do you have any suggestions on how to make it sound less like a brochure? -(Dominique Kohoron (talk) 05:00, 17 September 2014 (UTC))


 * The very last sentence is an example of what I am thinking of. Personally, I am a "as few words as possible" kind of person, in a simple and direct style. But that is just me! -Postcard Cathy (talk)