Talk:Sexuality in The Lord of the Rings/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Iazyges (talk · contribs) 01:48, 20 September 2021 (UTC)

Criteria
GA Criteria:
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 * 1.a   ✅
 * 1.b   ✅
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 * 2.a   ✅
 * 2.b   ✅
 * 2.c   ✅
 * 2.d   ✅
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 * 3.a   ✅
 * 3.b   ✅
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 * No DAB links   ✅
 * No dead links   ✅
 * No missing citations   ✅

Prose Suggestions
Please note that almost all of these are suggestions, and can be implemented or ignored at your discretion. Any changes I deem necessary for the article to pass GA standards I will bold.

Lede

 * from not necessarily homosexual to plainly homoerotic, or as an idealised heroic friendship. suggest from close but not necessarily homosexual to plainly homoerotic, or as an idealised heroic friendship.
 * Done.

Tolkien's background

 * and educated at boys' grammar schools suggest and educated at male-only grammar schools
 * Done.

Shieldmaiden

 * Jackson does however make Aragorn far more romantic than do either Tolkien or Bakshi must mention how Bakshi directed The Lord of the Rings (1978 film), and link to him.
 * Done.

Officer-batman relationship

 * The relationship that most closely approaches homosexuality suggest The relationship that most closely approaches homosexuality, in the eyes of scholars,
 * Added.


 * That is all my suggestions, once information regarding Bakshi is added, I will pass the article. Additionally, feel free to revert any of my edits. Iazyges   Consermonor   Opus meum  02:25, 20 September 2021 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for the review. Chiswick Chap (talk) 08:58, 20 September 2021 (UTC)