Talk:Seychelles women's national football team/GA2

GA Reassessment
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I will be reassessing this article to determine whether it still meets the Good Article criteria. Any user is encouraged to assist in improving the article to keep it up to GA standards. Thanks. PCN02WPS ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 05:56, 2 July 2022 (UTC)

Lead

 * The article is orange-tagged as a whole, which could qualify for a quickfail but I will do the full review anyways in hopes that it can be salvaged.
 * The lead seems to be poorly formatted, with the opening sentence failing to link Association football, and mention FIFA, the confederation and/or subconfederation in which the team plays, or any other information.

History

 * Link FIFA
 * "In 1985, almost no country in the world had a women's national football team" → "In 1985, few countries had a women's national football team"
 * "including the Seychelles who did play in a single FIFA sanctioned match between 1950 and June 2012" → did or did not? Also, hyphenate "FIFA-sanctioned"
 * "three nation tournament hosted by Mauritius" → hyphenate "three-nation" and link Mauritius women's national football team
 * "Overall, they finished last, scoring only one goal in the competition." → redundant, as the previous sentence tells they lost to both of the other teams and scored one and zero goals in their two games, respectively, for a total of one goal scored.
 * "In 2005, Zambia was supposed to host a regional COSAFA" → "COSAFA" is not defined or linked in the text, only the infobox
 * "with ten teams agreeing to send teams including" → repetitive, replace first "teams" with "nations" or "countries"
 * "Seychelles did not record a match in the event" → did the event take place at all? If not, it's bizarre not to mention this explicitly and leave it to the reader to assume
 * "The country has an official under-17 team, the Seychelles women's national under-17 football team" → redundant to say that "[The Seychelles] has an under-17 team, [which is the] Seychelles women's national under-17 football team". Gives the exact same information twice in a row.

Results and fixtures

 * "as well as any future matches that have been scheduled" → incorrect as no future matches are listed

Competitive record

 * The "COSAFA Women's Championship" table seems to have totals pasted from another nation's page, as it goes without saying that a team which hasn't ever competed in a particular tournament couldn't have recorded 6 matches played (for a record of 1 draw and 5 losses), 4 goals scored, and 47 goals allowed in that tournament.

Overall review conclusion
WP:GAR states that An individual assessment may be closed after seven days of no activity. As there has been no activity on the review for seven days (all edits to the page are either adding tags or adding fixtures/results), I am closing the review. My conclusion is that the article fails GA criteria 1a, 1b, 2a, 2b, 2c, and 3a at least, and therefore will be delisted. If improvements are made in the future, and the article is brought up to par, it can be renominated for GA. PCN02WPS  ( talk  &#124;  contribs ) 21:09, 9 July 2022 (UTC)