Talk:Seymour Glass

Tone issue
The following passage seems a bit off:

"One undertands only partly why this inhuman act is to commit by Seymour. When considering that this girl named Charlotte is the very copy of Teddy's sister Booper who finally kills her brother - it is only fair to throw a stone to her..."

The ellipsis should be revised out, and "to commit by Seymour" could be improved as "why this inhuman act is committed by Seymour," although I question the apparent point of view of this section. It might not be desirable to engage in literary criticism here - my belief. --Edwin Herdman 06:10, 15 February 2007 (UTC)