Talk:Shadow Hearts: Covenant/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Abryn (talk · contribs) 16:07, 27 August 2019 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):  d (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * "Another key location is the Graveyard, a realm within protagonist Yuri Hyuga's soul." - Feels a bit repetitive to have the Graveyard explained twice.
 * Fixed some issues I found, please review the changes when you get the chance.
 * I noted a bit of repetition with the word "called" being used for multiple sentences in a row. Can you fix that up?


 * That said, the couple of notes I have aren't enough to halt it passing, just make sure to take them into consideration. Good job. - Bryn (talk) (contributions) 18:47, 4 September 2019 (UTC)