Talk:Shakereh Khaleeli

I think the grammar is pretty good now, so I removed the copyedit tag. Sad article. Peasreach77 (talk) 06:09, 28 January 2012 (UTC)

Lack of encyclopedic treatment of the subject
The article is loaded with emotive sentences and phrases e.g "He lived in Bangalore like a king" and "When the murder was disclosed, it shook the nation.", which smacks of a less-than-encyclopedic and neutral approach to the subject matter. Also, depending on perspective, the article could be deemed to contain unnecessary details (about Khaleeli's first husband), or to be incomplete (no mention of the circumstances that led to the murder, if available). This article needs to be rewritten in order to meet encyclopedic standards. Knaveknight (talk) 15:37, 25 September 2016 (UTC)