Talk:Shanghai Tunnel Bar/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kavyansh.Singh (talk · contribs) 16:16, 6 January 2022 (UTC) Nominator: Another Believer (talk · contribs) at 18:00, 27 December 2021 (UTC)

Prose

 * in Portland, Oregon's Old Town Chinatown neighborhood, in the United States. → "in the Old Town Chinatown neighborhood, Portland, Oregon."
 * For many of my Good article reviews for restaurants, I've been asked to include national context (United States). --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:52, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Every information present in the lead should be there in the prose as well. United States is never repeated again in the prose. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:11, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Ok! ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:12, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * as BLTs — pipe 's' out of the link
 * I'm not sure what you mean. Linking is correct as far as I can tell ( BLTs ). Can you clarify? --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:52, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Oh, its fine. I was reading in visual edit mode&nbsp... – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:11, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Ok, thanks --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:12, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * has been described as a "gruff but lovable" and "dank, brick-lined basement" — described by whom?
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:56, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * sorts of criminal enterprise". — the full-stop should be inside the quotes. It is there in the original quotes as well.
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:52, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * The bar had at least five pinball machines, as of 2017 — its been 5 years in 2017. Any updates here?
 * Nope! -- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:52, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Then writing it as "as of 2021 2022" would be more accurate, what do you think? – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:12, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * But the source was published in 2017. I'd only update if there were a more recent source confirming the number of pinball machines. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:13, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * gave the bar a score of seven — seven out of ten? out of hundred? specify
 * I've removed. The Oregonian article does not specific scale. I'm sure the scale exists somewhere but not easy to find. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:56, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * for eating -- it's — perhaps, those two dashes (--) should be an em-dash (—)
 * Agree. ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:52, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * $2 dollar — we have dollar symbol and well as 'dollar' written.
 * This is a direct quote. Should we leave alone or adjust so not confusing to Wikipedia readers? --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:58, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Well, removing the word 'dollar' does not change any meaning/view-point of the quote. MOS:CONFORM says that "A quotation is not a facsimile and, in most cases, it is not a requirement that the original formatting be preserved." I know that MOS is particularly for formatting punctuation, but in this case, I think there is no harm in adjusting. – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 17:11, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 17:13, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * The Multnomah county has never been mentioned in the article. Is it needed in the info-box?
 * This is a basic template parameter which I've used on ~30 other Good articles for PDX restaurants, so I'd leave for consistency. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:52, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Is there anything else to say about the article.

Images
Just an FYI, I plan to take photographs of the bar's exterior (and hopefully interior) as soon as possible, since I live in Portland. I've promoted ~30 Portland restaurant articles to Good status and so far an article being unillustrated has not prevented Good article promotion. Hope you understand! Thanks for reviewing. --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:27, 6 January 2022 (UTC)
 * I know. The image section is here just because it is part of my standard GA review format (see 1, 2)


 * File:Shanghai Tunnel Bar logo.jpeg needs stronger WP:NFCC. It currently has "Author or copyright owner" empty.
 * I uploaded this image the same way I have all other restaurant logos. I've added 'Shanghai Tunnel Bar' as the author if that's helpful. Thanks! --- Another Believer ( Talk ) 16:59, 6 January 2022 (UTC)