Talk:Sharon Azrieli

Family
Is she the daughter of David Azrieli? DGtal (talk) 22:13, 9 December 2017 (UTC)
 * Answer seems to be yes. DGtal (talk) 05:49, 10 December 2017 (UTC)

Rewriting page in a neutral tone.
Hello everyone. I am new to Wikipedia but interested in the arts and thought this page would make a great first project. I have completed the Wikipedia Adventure, one of the concepts I learned about was the neutral point of view. It appears this page has not been written in the neutral point of view, therefore I am going to attempt to neutralise it, copyediting for grammar along the way. Please note this is my first attempt at properly rewriting a page so if there are any problems or anything I do incorrectly please let me know straight away via my talk page. Albrighton Titon (talk) 18:51, 10 October 2018 (UTC)

Removal of maintenance tag
I have removed the promotional content and fixed the tone of the piece. Unless anyone has any further suggestions on possible improvements I will be removing the maintenance tag shortly. Albrighton Titon (talk) 06:18, 13 October 2018 (UTC)

Removal of Accolades section
It appears the term "accolade" may breach neutrality. I am proposing removing it for now and if someone wants to put the section back in under a different title with proper references they can. Albrighton Titon (talk) 09:20, 14 October 2018 (UTC)