Talk:Sharur (mythological weapon)

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I did a bit of a copyedit on the article. The language of the recounting of the myth is a little strained still. We really try to present all information in the most neutral way possible, which not only means not using too many unnecessary adjectives, but providing sourcing for those which are used.

If the Sharur played any degree of a significant role in any other myths, they could probably be included as well. John Carter (talk) 22:57, 15 May 2012 (UTC)


 * Thanks a lot for your contribution! I was initially trying to mirror the descriptions used in the source texts (which I got from the article on Ninurta) but your revisions are much better and clearer! DrPhen (talk) 00:28, 16 May 2012 (UTC)