Talk:Shathel Taqa

Article Issues
In order for an article on wikipedia to be verifiable, the content must be backed up with secondary sources. At present, the content of this article is not sourced, which leads to several problems. Also, the language should be cleaned up to make the article less laudatory, changing phrases such as "His poems are known to be close to one’s heart" and "Readers can also feel the rich heritage of different sources expressed in sincere and deep emotional way", which would be fine if they were quotations by critics but at present represent at least original research, but probably lead towards unintentional POV. Mrathel (talk) 15:40, 7 December 2009 (UTC)