Talk:Shattered Glass (Britney Spears song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Adabow (talk · contribs) 04:11, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Dablinks - one found and fixed
 * ELs are clean

Lead

 * Add "Unusual You" as the A-side in infobox
 * ❌ I think that only works for the singles template. I tried putting it in, but nothing showed up. I might be doing it wrong. -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:01, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Strange, I thought it had the parameter. Take a look at my proposal if ya want to. :D
 * Great idea! Hope they change it, since there are a lot of charted B-Sides out there. -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:34, 10 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Release date in infobox should be September 15, 2009
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:01, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * In the second sentence you should use the stage names for Dr. Luke and Benny Blanco so that readers do not think their were five people involved, instead of three
 * ✅ Changed to Lukasz "Dr. Luke" Gottwald and same for Blanco. -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:01, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Link teen-pop, dance and disco
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:01, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Link Auto-Tune
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:01, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Link B-side
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:01, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Link Unusual You
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:01, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Link component charts to Billboard charts
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:01, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Link the different charts

Background and composition

 * Reduce File:05 Shattered Glass.ogg to about 65kbps and less than 17.2 seconds
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Per WP:SAMPLE it still needs to be trimmed to less than 10% (17.2 seconds). Adabow (talk · contribs) 06:51, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
 * AGH Can't believe I forgot that in the first place. Used a completely different portion of the song to match the new time frame. -- ĈÞЯİŒ   1ооо  22:33, 10 March 2011 (UTC)


 * The caption is a mess - rewrite it
 * -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Link pop
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Link guitar
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Link rift
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * What is a "jagged" verse?
 * Well, since I'm pretty sure they were speaking of her vocals, I changed it to "jagged and distorted vocals in the chorus" -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Auto-Tuned in lead, auto-tuned here - be consistent
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * "though it has been noted" - by who?
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * "The song takes influences from teen pop..." - takes influences?
 * Change to "contains elements of" -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * The sentence about lyrics is exactly the same as in the lead
 * Less detailed in sentence in the lead. -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:24, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * You now have "the song is very emotional" in the lead, which is not said later, and sounds to be the opposite of what the song is. Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:00, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
 * "Lyrically, the song has varying emotions in its lyrics, speaking of flirting, betrayal, and a sense of entrapment as well as self loathing in her relationship with fame." -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:24, 10 March 2011 (UTC)

Reception

 * Repeating the quote in the image caption is a bit POV


 * You need to identify writers here, as newspapers don't form opinions; their writers do
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * said the song and 'Womanizer' "use their pulsing..." - Womanizer should have double quote marks ("), and reword so that you don't have two quote marks next to each other
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * The Daily News ref should be next to its quote
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Link Billboard charts
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * No, it isn't. Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:06, 10 March 2011 (UTC)


 * How do you know that it is digital downloads? Maybe include a bit about the Digital Songs charting here
 * Because it has to be. There is no sign of any other kind of release her except for digital download on the album. -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)
 * OK, but I maintain that the Digital Songs info would be better up here. See...errm...Bigger (Justin Bieber song) for an example. Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:06, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Billboard has failed to show that Shattered Glass charted on its official website, so we can't compare it to other songs from Circus. Anyway, it says nearly the same thing. -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:21, 10 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Link Billboard Hot 100
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * " remaining on the chart for that week" - remove
 * Changed it. Now say "before dropping off and reappearing for the week of..." -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * "and then reappearing the week after next" - a date would be better
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * The Billboard ref does not support the statement
 * If you are speaking of the weeks it charted, you will need to look at the visualizer using the arrow on the left
 * It confirms that it was on the "iLike" chart for 2 weeks, but nothing about Hot 100. Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:25, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
 * lol I'm blind. Used allmusic and aCharts instead. Also removed that it was there for two weeks, since I guess it isn't true. -- ĈÞЯİŒ   1ооо  22:17, 10 March 2011 (UTC)


 * "was also able to chart" → charted
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * pop chart → Pop Songs
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * digital songs → Hot Digital Songs
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Link Canadian Hot 100
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * "and thirty-six" → and number thirty-six
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Canadian digital songs chart → Hot Canadian Digital Singles
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  22:56, 9 March 2011 (UTC)

Track listing

 * What happened to New Zealand?


 * Link Unusual You
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  23:14, 9 March 2011 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

 * Link names
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  23:13, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Link vocals to singing (for Spears)
 * ✅ -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  23:13, 9 March 2011 (UTC)

Charts

 * Why not use the Billboard page for refs?
 * Because Billboard fails to properly archive most songs that are not singles that chart. -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  23:11, 9 March 2011 (UTC)

Summary

 * Not too good a start, some work to do. I'll put the review on hold for seven days. Adabow (talk · contribs) 04:11, 9 March 2011 (UTC)


 * Also, the release notes for Unusual You will not contain the release date. Adabow (talk · contribs) 07:21, 10 March 2011 (UTC)
 * Fixed. For some reason, the Hung Medien site was removed. -- ĈÞЯİŒ  1ооо  21:48, 10 March 2011 (UTC)