Talk:She's All I Ever Had/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 10:01, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

This is the last remaining songs GAN from October, therefore I shall wipe it out! --K. Peake 10:01, 13 January 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song
 * Why are the producers ordered differently in the infobox from elsewhere?
 * In the prose, add after the main producers, "with co-production from Rosa."
 * Wikilink love song
 * "while he continues to live" → "while continuing to live"
 * "who complimented its production" → "who complimented the production"
 * "reached the summit of" → "reached the summit of both"
 * "The track was" → "The version was"
 * Wikilink music video and add some info to the lead about the synopsis
 * ✅--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 14:59, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

Background and release

 * Remove the comma before Vuelve
 * It does not appear that any of the sources here actually back up critics in general praising the album
 * Los Angeles Times article is a review of the album, praising it and giving it 3.5 stars out of 4, but if I need to add more reviews to back it up, I will add. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 10:48, 14 January 2022 (UTC)
 * This is one review so is not a suitable source for consensus and I don't think adding multiple ones is suitable for backing up critics praising it; use a source that states the reviews were positive or remove this part. --K. Peake 11:09, 15 January 2022 (UTC)


 * "It topped the charts" → "The song topped the charts"
 * "has been working" → "had started working"
 * "that his album," → "that the album,"
 * "has been set for" → "had been set for"
 * Pipe best-selling singles of all time to List of best-selling singles
 * Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
 * "mentioning that the album was" → "mentioning that it was"
 * "that one of the album's tracks" → "that one of the tracks" because we already know this is about the album
 * "Martin dedicated the track" specify if this is the former or latter
 * "on August 30, 1999, September 15, 1999, and" → "on August 30, September 15, and" since 1999 being after the last date makes it clear all of them are from the year
 * "The maxi singles contain different" → "The singles contain different"
 * ✅--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 14:59, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

Music and lyrics

 * Audio sample looks good!
 * Like I said about the lead, mention the co-production after the lead producers
 * "According to the both versions'" → "According to both versions'"
 * Remove pipe on beats per minute
 * Wikilink love song
 * Are you sure the punctuation shouldn't be inside quotes for the lyrics?
 * ✅--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 14:59, 14 January 2022 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * "and heartfelt" and "boasting" → "and heartfelt", and "boasting"
 * "of Robi Rosa’s" → "of Robi Rosa's" (wrong apostrophe format)
 * "in the feels".[37]" → "in the feels",[37] while" merging with the following sentence
 * ✅--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:26, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

Accolades

 * ""Bella" was also nominated for" → "It was also nominated for"
 * 2000 Latin Billboard Music Awards → 2000 Latin Billboard Music Awards
 * "in Pop/Ballad category" → "in the Pop/Ballad category"
 * Pipe BMI Latin Awards to BMI Film & TV Awards
 * ✅--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:26, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

Commercial performance

 * "it became Martin's second top five" → "the song became Martin's second top-five"
 * "and Adult Contemporary, respectively." → "and Adult Contemporary charts, respectively."
 * "On the latter, it spent 38 weeks on the chart, becoming Martin's first top 10" → "It spent 38 weeks on the latter chart, becoming Martin's first top-10"
 * Mention the date it was certified by the RIAA and that this is for those copies in the US
 * Remove Spanish-language intro to "Bella" since this is already known
 * "It also peaked" → "The track also peaked"
 * Per Geographical order, Canada should be the first of the para and use the title at the start of this sentence instead
 * "top five hit in the country," → "top-five hit in Canada,"
 * After the Australia sentence, add one about how the song reached the top 10 in New Zealand, peaking at number eight
 * Croatia should be after the Oceania territories per Geographical order, then follow it with the other top 10 and 20 ones that are in Europe
 * [72] is not displaying any position
 * ✅--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:46, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

Music videos

 * Img looks good!
 * Remove "for "She's All I Ever Had"" after the accompanying music video part, as the term accompanying makes it clear this is for the song
 * ✅--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:50, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

Live performances and appearances in media

 * The term "impressive" is not encyclopedic to describe women, so remove the word
 * "the sixth performance" → "the sixth best performance"
 * "Daneesha Davis of" → "Daneesha Davis of the"
 * "of the former as" → "of the song as" because it was sentences ago that both were mentioned
 * "in 2006 where Martin" → "in 2006, where Martin"
 * "as snake on" → "as the snake on"
 * ✅--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:51, 15 January 2022 (UTC)


 * Pipe season two to The Masked Singer (American season 2)
 * It is not the American series, the song was covered on the second season of the Bulgarian series, which I already piped. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:51, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

Formats and track listings

 * Good

Credits and personnel

 * Good

Weekly charts

 * Pipe HRT TO Hrvatska radiotelevizija
 * Again, the Iceland position is not displayed by the source
 * ✅--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:53, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

Year-end charts

 * Good

Certifications and sales

 * Retitle to Certifications per no specific sales figures being mentioned by a source
 * ✅--آرمین هویدایی (talk) 15:53, 15 January 2022 (UTC)

Release history

 * Good

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed! --K. Peake 11:09, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
 * Thank you for another wonderful review. As always it was an honor for me. I fixed all the issues, I hope I haven't missed anything. If I had, please tell me to fix it. Thank you so much. آرمین هویدایی (talk) 16:10, 15 January 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ time, you have done a solid job once again! --K. Peake 07:37, 16 January 2022 (UTC)