Talk:She's Done it Again/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 15:23, 7 February 2015 (UTC)

I'll give this a review shortly. Wizardman 15:23, 7 February 2015 (UTC)

Here's what I found:
 * " and featured the leading players, Anna Rosemond and Frank H. Crane." rm comma; same for later in the article when this is noted.
 * "Bowers' also credits Blair Smith as the cameraman." rm apostrophe
 * " and joined in the autumn of 1909 and in their first year of productions" tweak to "...autumn of 1909, their first year..."
 * "Crane's was the first leading man" Crane was
 * "by Ray Norton to support that it a good comedy" that it is a

I'll put the article on hold and will pass when fixed. Wizardman 15:38, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
 * Fixes done . Thanks for reviewing. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 15:51, 7 February 2015 (UTC)
 * No problem; looks good, article passes. Wizardman  16:07, 7 February 2015 (UTC)