Talk:She's Madonna/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 19:48, 25 December 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * Add release year for Rudebox
 * the third and final international single released from the album → its third and final single
 * Williams had played the song → Use "the track" here for alternation
 * Musically the song was inspired by Kraftwerk's 1983 single → set comma after "Musically"
 * reached the top-five → no -
 * gold certifications → Gold certifications
 * A music video of the track → A music video for the track
 * when was the video released?

Infobox

 * Alternative text for the cover artwork is missing
 * Remove the genre as it's unreferenced in the article's body

Background

 * "She's Madonna" was a collaboration between Williams and Pet Shop Boys and was the fifth and final → "She's Madonna" is a collaboration between Williams and Pet Shop Boys, and serves as the fifth and final
 * Release year of Rudebox in brackets
 * was supposed to be released, Williams had just come out → state "he" here for alternation
 * had with his ex-girlfriend Tania Strecker.[1] She told → had with his ex-girlfriend Tania Strecker, who told
 * commenting: "There is nothing → : to ,
 * at all... I have → ... to [...]
 * Contactmusic.com → Remove the ".com" part

Composition

 * Williams stated: "My life → : to ,
 * After playing "Tour de France" Williams → After playing "Tour de France", the singer
 * "She's Madonna" and the song was composed → "She's Madonna", following which the single was composed
 * Madonna, which goes like "We're → remove "which goes like"
 * and the song has a s basic sequence → state "track" here for alternation

Critical reception

 * "She's Madonna" was released in the United Kingdom on 5 March 2007.[9] → Please remove this and make a "Release history" section under "Certifications"
 * I have not done this since its just one release date available, and per MOS:TABLE we should not make tabular entry for single point, rather make it part of the prose. — I B  [ Poke  ] 07:05, 29 December 2016 (UTC)
 * three out of five stars noting that the track → comma before "noting"
 * than him [Madonna]?" Levine concluded → comma before "Levine"
 * Entertainment.ie → Remove that ".ie" part
 * That is the name of the page also but changed. — I B  [ Poke  ] 07:05, 29 December 2016 (UTC)
 * that the Pet Shop Boys own musical influence → that Pet Shop Boys' own musical influence
 * The song received negative review → The song further received a negative review

Chart performance

 * top-ten → top 10
 * lowest peaking → lowest-peaking
 * Scotland where it → comma before "where it"
 * top-ten → top 10
 * In Ireland it debuted → comma after "Ireland"
 * Across Europe the song had → comma before "the song"
 * top-five → top five
 * on the chart for multiple week → on the charts for multiple weeks
 * It received gold certification from → It received a Gold certification in
 * Comma before "respectively"

Music video

 * break from his Close Encounters Tour, and features Williams → break from William's Close Encounters Tour, and features him
 * stage... Even → stage [...]
 * to sing the song, in front of an → remove comma

Track listing

 * flawless ;)

Credits and personnel

 * Unlink Williams here
 * Credits adapted from Robbie Williams' → no full names here

Charts

 * flawless ;)

Certifications

 * flawless ;)

Copy-violation

 * 48.7%; you may want to remove something here!
 * Done! the WP:PLAGIARISM rule. — I B  [ Poke  ] 07:05, 29 December 2016 (UTC)

Images and others

 * Article perfectly illustrated by images ;)

Links

 * No problems here!