Talk:She's a Mess/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Hahc21 (talk · contribs) 22:12, 1 June 2012 (UTC)

Hey! I'm back from my vacation. I'll be reviewing again. And i'll start wtih this... -- Hahc21 [ TALK ] [ CONTRIBS  ] 22:12, 1 June 2012 (UTC)

Review
Nothing else to be noted here. Also, i felt weird when reading the article and without the Background section. of course, this is just a comment about past reviews XD -- Hahc21 [ TALK ] [ CONTRIBS  ] 22:35, 1 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I can't really source the "lack of identity" since it's a conclusion. Rewritten last sentence of the lead. Till I Go Home talk  edits 01:21, 2 June 2012 (UTC)
 * but a conclusion of yours? Remember avoiding OR (Just commenting)... I think it is better now. -- Hahc21 [ TALK ] [ CONTRIBS  ] 01:43, 2 June 2012 (UTC)
 * "wouldn't have sounded much different coming from any other girl band", "just about good enough to forget the absurdity of it being a Sugababes track". Till I Go Home talk  edits 01:57, 2 June 2012 (UTC)
 * I changed it again, except this time with "originality". Till I Go Home talk  edits 02:00, 2 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Ok, now there won't be doubts about if its OR or not. Now it is clearer :) -- Hahc21 [ TALK ] [ CONTRIBS  ] 02:10, 2 June 2012 (UTC)

Verdict

 * Final comment: I'm a little concerned about the WP:NSONGS guideline since it hasn't charted, but it's my personal opinion and then kind of irrelevant here. The article meets all the criteria, and as a result, it is promoted to GA status. Regards. -- Hahc21 [ TALK ] [ CONTRIBS  ] 16:02, 2 June 2012 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Till I Go Home talk  edits 16:16, 2 June 2012 (UTC)