Talk:She Ain't You/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Jivesh boodhun (talk · contribs) 12:17, 6 October 2011 (UTC)


 * Hi. I will review this article. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:17, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Question

 * Has the article ever been copy-edited? ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:24, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * No, is that going to be a problem? Oz   talk  12:33, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Nooooo. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:41, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Media Review

 * The sample should be 25 seconds long per WP:Music samples. ✅
 * The sample can remain only if you improve the rationale. If you need help, tell me. Do not hesitate.
 * The image is the music video section looks fine to me.


 * ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:22, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Infobox

 * border = yes >>> should be added ✅
 * Remove (radio) It is used only when a song is serviced to radio exclusively. For example, "Put It in a Love Song". ✅
 * Add the year of recording
 * Not sure what year it was recorded. Album notes don't mention it. Oz   talk  12:33, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Let it be. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:42, 6 October 2011 (UTC)


 * ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:27, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Lead

 * as the fourth US single from Brown's fourth >>> serving as the fourth US single..........✅
 * The song received a mixed response from critics. >>> The song received mixed to positive reviews form music critics. ✅
 * Note:You should know how to differentiate between mixed and mixed to positive.

>>> "She Ain't You" reached number five on the US Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart, number 17 on the Pop Songs chart, and number 27 on the US Billboard Hot 100 chart. ✅
 * In the United States, "She Ain't You" reached number five on the Hot R&B/Hip-Hop Songs chart, number seventeen on the Pop Songs chart, and number twenty-seven on the Billboard Hot 100. ✅
 * Not done. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:29, 10 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Note: I suggest you read WP:NUMBERS.
 * ✅ Oz   talk  12:47, 10 October 2011 (UTC)


 * The song also charted in the top-thirty in Australia and New Zealand. >>> The song also charted within the top-thirty on charts in Australia and New Zealand. ✅
 * Question: Was it released in these territories. Or is this a case similar to Na, na, na, diva is a female version of a hustla / Of a hustla, of a, of a hustla / Na, na, na, diva is a female version of a hustla / Of a hustla, of a, of a hustla
 * No, it was exactly like "Diva". Oz   talk  12:55, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * So you have to make a little story. Lol.... Even though the song was not released outside the US.... blablabla ✅
 * Not done. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:30, 10 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Check 'Chart performance' section. Oz   talk  07:44, 10 October 2011 (UTC)
 * The lead too should have that. And these is one more comment above. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:53, 10 October 2011 (UTC)
 * ✅ Oz   talk  12:47, 10 October 2011 (UTC)


 * An accompanying music video >>> The accompanying music video for the single ✅
 * and sees Brown >>> and features Brown ✅
 * The song has been performed >>> Brown performed "She Ain't You" live ✅


 * ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:40, 6 October 2011 (UTC)

Background and composition
I will continue at night. For now, i have to go and listen to some of this girl's music. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 12:49, 6 October 2011 (UTC)
 * I will complete this on Thursday. Right now, i have exams. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:31, 10 October 2011 (UTC)
 * That's fine by me. Good luck with your exams! Oz   talk  07:44, 10 October 2011 (UTC)
 * Awwwwww thanks. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 07:56, 10 October 2011 (UTC)

When Will I Continue >>> After November 16, 2011
★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 10:59, 1 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Ok then. Oz   talk  11:11, 1 November 2011 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * from or of?
 * the sample gave >>> It still gives, right?
 * added that its "definitely a song for the ladies ... maybe even for pop star Rihanna." >>> its?
 * ✅ Oz   talk  21:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

Chart performance

 * On the issue dated April 2, 2011
 * Expalnation: We say; For the chart issue dated April 2, 2011, otherwise use For the week ending April 2, 2011.


 * Make the necessary corrections elsewhere ^^^
 * on the Billboard Hot 100 >>> on the US Billboard Hot 100
 * for selling 35,000 digital copies >>> for selling more than 35,000 digital copies
 * On the New Zealand Singles Chart, "She Ain't You" debuted at number 37, and later peaked at number 27,[23] and spent a total of seven weeks on the chart >>> On the New Zealand Singles Chart, "She Ain't You" debuted at number 37, peaked at number 27, and spent a total of seven weeks on the chart.
 * ✅ Oz   talk  21:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

Music video

 * performs his iconic dance moves >>> is that a quote? Iconic? <<< Are you sure about the word iconic? If no, please put in between quotes and the as stated by bla bla bla thing.
 * The video opens with a dedication, saying, >>> The video opens with the following dedication,
 * in a '80s >>> in a 1980s
 * Link fedora
 *  In between this scene >>> Does not sound goo. Rephrase or tell me, is it scenes that you wanted to write?


 * Again, from or of?
 * the same magic >>> A quote?


 * ✅ Oz   talk  21:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

Live performances

 * 18,000 fans >>> All of them were fans? Lol.
 * I changed it to an audience of 18,000 people. Does that make sense? Lol. Oz   talk  21:38, 20 November 2011 (UTC)

Credits and personnel

 * No issues

Charts and certifications

 * No issues

Release dates

 * No issues

Jivesh's feelings

 * Very nice work. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 10:31, 20 November 2011 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)


 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (references): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:


 * Congratulations. This article has passes. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 04:09, 21 November 2011 (UTC)
 * Thank you! :D Oz   talk  05:10, 21 November 2011 (UTC)
 * You are welcome. ★Jivesh 1205★ (talk / ♫♫Give 4 a try!!!♫♫) 05:11, 21 November 2011 (UTC)