Talk:She Wolf (Shakira song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 21:55, 4 August 2013 (UTC)


 * General
 * Some problematic links
 * ✅ --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 14:05, 18 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Info box
 * Genres should be alphabetical
 * ✅ --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 14:05, 18 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * Link Columbian
 * The former duo → They aren't a duo, that implies that they are a pair who always work together.
 * translation titled → translation of the song titled
 * Commercially, the single was a huge success. → Bias, I'd remove this altogether.
 * component → Remove.
 * ability to dance → dancing ability
 * ✅ All --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 14:05, 18 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Background and composition
 * Shakira said that ""She Wolf" came to me very mysteriously. I was → Shakira said that the idea for "She Wolf" came to her "very mysteriously", revealing "I was
 * ✅ --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 14:05, 18 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Critical reception
 * a very positive → Slightly bias
 * the song "unique", and concluded that the song → the song... the song. Avoid repetition, and throughout this section.
 * ✅ All --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 14:05, 18 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Music video
 * "Flashdance" is a TV series, so it should be Flashdance
 * ✅ --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 14:05, 18 August 2013 (UTC)

Tables should be marked up for access and should have the shaded column.
 * Charts
 * I couldn't get this? Can you please clarify more? --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 14:05, 18 August 2013 (UTC)

Year ends should be two separate tables.
 * Well they are pretty much separated? --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 14:05, 18 August 2013 (UTC) ✅ --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 14:16, 18 August 2013 (UTC)


 * Refs
 * 41, 42, 44, 45, 47, 48, 50, 51 shouldn't have italics.
 * ✅ --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 14:05, 18 August 2013 (UTC)


 * 95 and 96 are not formatted.
 * ✅ --WonderBoy1998 (talk) 14:05, 18 August 2013 (UTC)

On hold. — ₳  aron  10:54, 18 August 2013 (UTC)
 * Status
 * Passing. —  ₳  aron  16:35, 18 August 2013 (UTC)