Talk:She said, "Don't make others suffer for your personal hatred."/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Tintor2 (talk · contribs) 18:49, 2 March 2023 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing this article.Tintor2 (talk) 18:49, 2 March 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

That's all.Tintor2 (talk) 02:57, 4 March 2023 (UTC)
 * Lead.
 * The premise is kinda long. It deals with the introduction to the series, a background and the content of the episode. Maybe trim it a bit?
 * The second paragraph features about the making of the series but instead just the themes.
 * Plot
 * Rei Ayanami and Gendo lack an introduction.
 * Production
 * The image was drawn by Sadamoto right? Crediting him would be good.
 * Reception
 * The merchandising remains kinda vague. Is it possible to explore it?
 * Tried my best. Thank you for the review.--TeenAngels1234 (talk) 11:14, 5 March 2023 (UTC)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

The article passes the 6 criteria:
 * It is well written and has the fictional information easy to understand.
 * Every part of the content is referenced.
 * It covers nearly everything about the episode (creation, themes,analysis, response)
 * It is written from a neutral point of view.

Good work.Tintor2 (talk) 14:00, 5 March 2023 (UTC)