Talk:Shelley Matheson/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 13:39, 30 August 2013 (UTC)

Comments quick ones, many of which I've said before.... I'll put it on hold for a few days, and I would also ask you to fix up the remaining GANs you've mass-nominated with these common problems. The Rambling Man (talk) 16:41, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Please see other similar reviews:
 * En-dashes.
 * AFAIK, they are all correct now. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:02, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Starting paras with surname rather than She.
 * Done. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:02, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Repetitive "she" in sentences (see Personal, five in a row...)
 * REduced. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:02, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
 * WP:LEAD, four paras is too much for a short article.
 * Reduced to two paragraphs. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:02, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Captions (incomplete sentences don't need a full stop).
 * This is already the case. The only stops are in the one on the guernsey, which is two complete sentences. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:02, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
 * "Gliders team mate Bridie Kean attended her graduation.[6]" trivial.
 * Removed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:02, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
 * What's the point of abbreviated DAS if you don't use it?
 * Removed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:02, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
 * "Women's Wheelchair basketball" or "Women's wheelchair basketball" (infobox).
 * Corrected. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:02, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
 * "against Germany women's national wheelchair basketball team" do you mean "against Germany"?
 * It's awkward, but for some reason is the way that Wikipedia names thing. Deleted sentence. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:03, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Ref 6 looks odd.
 * Corrected. An artifact of HTML Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:02, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Ref 16 "Services — University of" should be an en-dash, not an em-dash.
 * Okay. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:02, 6 September 2013 (UTC)
 * All points addressed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 23:03, 6 September 2013 (UTC)

Further The Rambling Man (talk) 15:58, 13 September 2013 (UTC)
 * I don't understand "Chaplin competed with the Gliders at the 2012 Summer Paralympics. In the gold medal game against Germany at the 2012 Summer Paralympics".
 * Deleted second sentence. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:50, 13 September 2013 (UTC)
 * Why link Oz at the 2012 Paralympics second time round?
 * Removed duplicated links with the link tool
 * Stat table headings need en-dashes.
 * Added ndashes
 * Ref col shouldn't be sortable.
 * Made table non-sortable
 * FTM-A col doesn't sort correctly.
 * Made table non-sortable
 * Nor does FGM-A.
 * Made table non-sortable
 * Two seasons in that table appear to be grey, the other three not. Why?
 * Made table non-sortable
 * All points addressed. Hawkeye7 (talk) 21:50, 13 September 2013 (UTC)