Talk:Shenandoah (schooner)

Comment from Joe
I think the concluding section sounds biased and promotional. You should provide a less evaluative, more factual, conclusion. Maybe you don't need a conclusion.

Article inconsistent with Wikipedia neutrality/non-promotional guidelines
This article is inconsistent with Wikipedia neutrality/non-promotional guidelines. It should be re-written to measure up to those standards. Wikiuser100 (talk) 21:28, 9 May 2008 (UTC)
 * Yes, it does read like an advert .. I have added NPOV tag until other references and npov rewrite addresses this.. LeeVJ (talk)

I removed the section that gave out information on what type of cruises were offered to help make this article non-promotional.(Rhvanwinkle (talk) 20:27, 13 December 2008 (UTC))