Talk:Shiena Nishizawa/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 06:04, 13 August 2018 (UTC)

Reviewing later. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  06:04, 13 August 2018 (UTC)


 * Make sure every Japanese reference has a translated title.
 * Original video animation needs to be linked, and the phrase needs to be written out next to its abbreviation.
 * Refs 2 (Natalie), 3 (M-ON!), 10 (ANN), 13-16 (ANN), 18-19 (ANN), 23 (ANN), and 25 (Manga Tokyo) needs expansion (authors, translated title).
 * "and she lists artists such as Foo Fighters as her musical inspirations." Might want to add Dave Grohl into this to be even more accurate.
 * No info on the directors of some MVs?
 * Archival of references strongly recommended.
 * Checklinks failed on some of the refs, but all of them worked for me. Also assuming good faith on Japanese references.

Pretty interesting article. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  05:13, 14 August 2018 (UTC)
 * I've done all of the above aside from the archiving, which as far as I can tell is usually optional for these kinds of things. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 02:46, 15 August 2018 (UTC)
 * Promoting. Nova Crystallis   (Talk)  03:16, 15 August 2018 (UTC)