Talk:Shimon Gershon Rosenberg

English
A lot of sentences in the article show non-native English, which makes it clumsy to read. The worst is this one, which is incomprehensible if one doesn't know Hebrew: "In an evening that was held so that his health would improve on the 21 of May 2007, an institution was established in order to bring his writings to light." In English we don't "hold" an "evening"; what was the event? Is the date the date of the "evening" or of his hoped-for recovery? What's an "institution"? "Bring to light" means something different in English: לגלות, and not להוציא לאור.--Linguistatlunch (talk) 18:31, 5 December 2018 (UTC)