Talk:Shimr

Comment: The current version of the article describes him as being from two different tribes. Unless one is a sub-group of the other, this seems like an internal inconsistency to me.

Also: how much of the story of this mythical figure based on real history, and how much is folklore? -- Emerine (talk) 16:47, 31 May 2014 (UTC)

The article uses the term "Khavarej tribe": does this mean Khawarij? -- Emerine (talk) 15:43, 3 June 2014 (UTC)

Looking at the general level of apparent inconsistency and poor grammar in this article, and its lack of sources, I'd suggest a thorough review of all the statements in it before attempting a merge. -- Emerine (talk) 15:54, 3 June 2014 (UTC)