Talk:Shin Megami Tensei If.../GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Narutolovehinata5 (talk · contribs) 11:20, 25 November 2016 (UTC)

Some suggestions:
 * Can the reception and legacy sections be merged? The two are relatively short; the reception section in particular is only one paragraph long.


 * And speaking of reception, are there any sales figures for the game?
 * Being an old Japanese-only Super Famicom game, this would be difficult without access to Japanese video game magazines from the time. If you can find any reliable sources mentioning the sales, I'd be happy to add the information.


 * There a few minor typos in the plot section. Can these be fixed?

At this point, I would fail this for the reasons above, but I'm giving IDV the benefit of the doubt and giving them a week to address the issues. Just a little more work and this will be a pass. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:20, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
 * I have addressed the issues you brought up. For the future, I believe these are way too minor to considering immediately failing a review.--IDVtalk 11:29, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
 * That was quick. Passed. Narutolovehinata5 tccsdnew 11:32, 25 November 2016 (UTC)
 * Thank you.--IDVtalk 11:32, 25 November 2016 (UTC)