Talk:Shine Ya Light/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 09:32, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

Reunited once again for this review! --K. Peake 09:32, 22 November 2022 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Why is no length in the infobox when the album track list shows one?
 * "from the album and serviced" → "from the album, serviced"
 * "It entered the record charts" → ""Shine Ya Light" entered the top 40 of the record charts" starting a new para at this point
 * "and the United Kingdom" → "and the UK"
 * "in the UK." → "in the third country."
 * "the singer performed the song live at" → "the singer performed it live at"
 * Add in 2012 at the end of this sentence to be specific

Background and composition

 * Pipe mastering to Mastering (audio)
 * Pipe mixing to Audio mixing (recorded music)
 * "for its programming" → "for the programming"
 * Pipe recording engineers to Audio engineer
 * Why have you written all of the remixes after including when this word implies only some are being mentioned?
 * "Ora elaborated: "[it] was" → "Ora elaborated: "[It] was"
 * "out of desire."" → "out of desire"." per MOS:QUOTE

Reception

 * "garnered positive reception from" → "was met with positive reception from"
 * Add the starting speech mark for "How We Do (Party)"
 * "empowerment, and romance."" → "empowerment, and romance"." per MOS:QUOTE
 * "praised its "street style,"" → "praised the "street style","
 * "wrote the message" → "found the message"
 * "as much as possible."" → "as much as possible"."
 * Pipe River Online to Kingston University
 * "one genre of music."" → "one genre of music"."
 * Start a new para at commercial reception
 * "as Ora's fifth charting single in the United Kingdom." → "standing as Ora's fifth charting single in the UK."
 * "it received a" → "the song received a"
 * "selling 200,000 units." → "selling 200,000 units in the country."
 * Wikilink Euro Digital Song Sales to itself per MOS:LINK2SECT

Music video

 * Merge with the below section, retitling to Music video and promotion
 * Img looks good!
 * "on 2 November." → "on 2 November 2012."
 * Wikilink Kosovo
 * "previous single, "R.I.P." (2012)." → "previous single "R.I.P."."
 * "worn by her in it" → "worn by her in the visual"
 * Remove the American magazine introduction to Rap-Up
 * "in style of the" → "in the style of the"
 * "It then progressively shows her and" → "She is then progressively shown with"
 * "with shots of the city" → "with shots of Pristina"
 * Fix MOS:QWQ issues throughout the last para
 * Idolator should not be italicised and pipe to Idolator (website) per MOS:LINK2SECT
 * Italicise Complex and pipe to Complex (magazine) per above
 * Remove pipe on Pure Charts

Live performances

 * This is too short to be its own section, so make the last para of the above one
 * Remove television network introduction and wikilink for MTV

Charts

 * Good

Certifications

 * Good

Release history

 * Label → Label(s)

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; nice work with this one! --K. Peake 11:43, 22 November 2022 (UTC)
 * Hello, hope you're well and thank you for taking the review. I have addressed all your comments. Cheers! Iaof2017 (talk) 16:03, 25 November 2022 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, sweet job on this! --K. Peake 21:32, 25 November 2022 (UTC)