Talk:Shirley Wu

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Hey AnnaAstrup,

I really enjoyed how well organized your article was. You did a great job conforming to the standards of Wiki. I think the thing I see being improved upon would be the initial description section. It would be sweet to see more details in that section so people could get a more in depth initial picture of who Shirley Wu is.

I think you have a good amount of sources for this article and did a good job using information from many sources.

--Jjziem51 (talk) 01:59, 12 April 2021 (UTC)

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 1 February 2021 and 21 May 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): AnnaAstrup. Peer reviewers: Acltennis, TheAlmightyLoaf1.

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Acltennis peer reviewing Annaastrup
I thought your article was very nice! It gave a good baseline on Wu's life including her education, career, notable works, and awards. I would try and find a way to cite your information more. Some of the sentences do not have citations, which is fine, but with all the sources you have, I'm sure one of them mentions the information you wrote in some way. This would make your work more credible. You could also speak about what she spoke about at each of the conferences she spoke at. Try and find subjects of visualizations possibly, so we know what kinds of visualizations she does. You have so many references, I need to find more good references. I also need to add links to wikipedia articles. I forgot to do that. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Acltennis (talk • contribs) 23:12, 12 April 2021 (UTC)