Talk:Shivalik-class frigate/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: QatarStarsLeague (talk · contribs) 03:02, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

I am very excited about these sorts of articles. QatarStarsLeague (talk) 03:02, 9 June 2013 (UTC)

Lead & infobox
There needs to be mention of the class' namesake within the body of the article. Already mentioned(?) in 2nd paragraph, last line.
 * I consider the body of the article to exclude the lead and info box. Sorry for the turbidity :)

Design and description
You will need to explain (wikilink) mentions of LAN and of chapati- and dosa-. ✅

General characteristics and propulsion
Fine here.

Electronics and sensors
Fine.

Armament
Instead of Western, you could simply say Israeli. Hal Dhruv or Sea King? Are they interchangeable? Or do they vary by ship? ✅

Construction and service
Please wikilink the JMSDF. ✅ "...deployed in the South China Sea." In what capacity? ✅

Ships
The next two sections are fine.

Conclusion
Very nice article. It has been delightful both observing and participating in the expansion of the GA Indian Warship section. Once everything has been fixed, I will pass this article. Congratulations! QatarStarsLeague (talk) 02:08, 10 June 2013 (UTC)