Talk:Shmap'n Shmazz/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 00:20, 23 February 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: ThaesOfereode (talk · contribs) 00:28, 9 May 2024 (UTC)

Hi ! Great album from a great band; thanks for doing so much work on it! Please see my notes below regarding fixes necessary to get this to GA status:

Hey ThaesOfereode! Thanks for the review! Looking forward to finish this by Sunday or so. I fixed 2a and 2b. 2a is something I realized after writing it, and was actually going to fix it by tomorrow before you started this review. It wasn't that time consuming as much of the article contains really just contains 10 minutes of the film.

I'll fix the prose in the coming days. I'll ping you when I feel confident I got most of it done (with me just realizing on how many times I repeat "decided to" lol) 49p (talk) 02:00, 9 May 2024 (UTC)

Sorry for the delay, but I think most of the errors are cleared up. I think 1a still need a little bit of work but 1b, 2a, 2b should be all good.49p (talk) 16:14, 16 May 2024 (UTC)


 * No worries! Major improvement since the last time. I've done a little more me copy editing with fresh eyes. One thing did catch my eye though; the first source in the section doesn't seem to confirm that  Can you point me to the sentence in the source if I just missed it? If not, we need to source or remove it. ThaesOfereode (talk) 17:49, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Also, can we confirm that it was the "Midwestern emo scene" (i.e., the emo scene in the Midwest) or the "Midwest emo scene" (i.e., the scene for the genre called "Midwest emo")? ThaesOfereode (talk) 17:51, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
 * I swear I had sources for this claim, probably from independent zines like heartattaCk or maximum rocknroll but I don't. I removed it. If I do find the sources in question, it's relating to "the emo scene in the Midwest" and not the genre itself. I'll reinstate if I find it. 49p (talk) 03:16, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Alright, sounds good. Drop me a ping when you think you've got 1a up to snuff and I'll come through to review again. ThaesOfereode (talk) 15:44, 17 May 2024 (UTC)
 * I think I got most of 1a done unless I'm messing something big. Also, I added another source to the article (Grubbs 2018). It should be reliable and it's only used on a quote by von Bohlen. 49p (talk) 01:50, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
 * Just checking on this. it seems like both of us forgot about this review lol. Could you take a look at it? 49p (talk) 18:04, 10 June 2024 (UTC)
 * Sorry, I thought you weren't done yet; I promise I've been keeping my eye on it! This thing's really close, but I have a few closing notes:
 * The music often uses irregular techniques that were uncommon in punk rock. – Like what? Need a (cited!) example or just remove it.
 * – Needs a citation at the end since it's a direct quote.
 * Other than that, I think we're cooking with grease. I'll read it over once more while you make these adjustments, but this article has really come together nicely! ThaesOfereode (talk) 00:20, 11 June 2024 (UTC)