Talk:Shon the Piper/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Good888 (talk · contribs) 14:00, 20 January 2015 (UTC)

Time for another lost film article review.

Lead section
 * "Lon Chaney may have appeared in this film, but it is not proven." Suggest rewrite to: "It was claimed that Lon Chaney appeared in this film, but this has been disputed."
 * "The film is now considered lost." I would perfer: "The film is presumed lost"

Plot
 * Link Moving Picture News.

Cast
 * I would perfer a source thats claims that Lon Chaney was a Clansman in this film.

Production
 * Link New York Clipper.

Release and reception
 * "A pre-release review of the film said" I would perfer that you note that The Leavenworth Times reviewed this.
 * "Another summary describes the film as "remarkably fresh and interesting subject" and described the film as a Scottish ballad." Likewise for The Huntington Herald.
 * Link all of the places.

References
 * Link the publishers of these sources if possible.

I will promote once the issues above are addressed. good888 (talk) 14:00, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * All fixed and linked up. ChrisGualtieri (talk) 15:42, 20 January 2015 (UTC)
 * I have fixed one error. With that done, I am promoting to GA class. good888 (talk) 16:32, 20 January 2015 (UTC)