Talk:Shoot (Hellblazer)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cognissonance (talk · contribs) 00:35, 19 January 2018 (UTC)

I wanna read the comic before I start the review - it won't take long. Cognissonance (talk) 00:35, 19 January 2018 (UTC)

Creation and cancellation

 * "Ellis began his run on the title with "Haunted"" – Ref. 2 (ComicsAlliance) should be put with ref. 3, as it substantiates this timeline.
 * "PR" – Link to Public Relations.
 * "reasoning that the Columbine massacre had just happened and the story's subject matter was too disturbing" – Copyedit: "reasoning that the story's subject matter was too disturbing in light of the Columbine massacre".

Aftermath

 * "Ellis was surprised, saying it "never occurred to [him]" that DC would change its stance about the story" – The source says "It never occurred to me that a new regime would feel differently". Add the context of "Levitz would not release the book so long as he was running DC" with the "new regime" detail.

Overall
As there are only minor concerns in my notes, I edited most of them myself. I will promote it once I get the answer to how the warning message could be dealt with and why the See also link is there. Cognissonance (talk) 04:39, 19 January 2018 (UTC) Cognissonance (talk) 04:46, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Thank you for reviewing this! I've responded above. JOE BRO  64  11:43, 19 January 2018 (UTC)
 * Thanks for the help, you're all set. They're fun reads, both comic and article. Cognissonance (talk) 11:55, 19 January 2018 (UTC)