Talk:Shoot for the Stars, Aim for the Moon/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 13:03, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 13:03, 2 April 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Non-free use rationales for both images are in great shape.
 * Additionally, I couldn't find any issues in the infobox.
 * Add a comma after "July 3, 2020" per WP:DATECOMMA.

Background and recording

 * The last sentence in the first paragraph needs a source.
 * That's about it here, #Recording looks great.

Music and lyrics

 * This has to be the best-sourced section ever created! Well done.
 * "song which features" "song that features"
 * "are sentimental" "are a sentimental"
 * "obsessesing" "obsessing"
 * "with bonus track" "with the bonus track"

Title and artwork

 * In the quote blocks, move the references after Complex.

Release and promotion

 * Some sentences here have 3-4 sources. I recommend using WP:CITEBUNDLEs to reduce the clutter.
 * "the albums second single" "the album's second single"
 * Since the sentence is kinda short, remove the comma after "relationship".

Critical reception

 * Try reducing the use of quotes with the help of WP:RECEPTION.
 * In the #Accolades table make the references column unsortable: ! scope="col" class=unsortable | Ref.

Commercial performance and track listing

 * Couldn't find any issues in either of these two sections.

Personnel and charts

 * These sections look good as well.

Certifications and release history

 * Looks good.

Progress
Some Dude From North Carolina thanks so much for the comments! I have addressed all of your concerns. The Ultimate Boss (talk) 06:20, 6 April 2021 (UTC)