Talk:Show Your Hand/GA1

GA Review
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Some general cleanup and smoothing out is still needed prior to GA standard. It's now on hold; let me know when you'd like me to take another look. —Giggy 03:31, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Throughout the article a lot of the paragraphs are really short; 1/2 lines. It makes it a bit annoying to read, and looks unprofessional; please merge them together wherever possible. Done Cavie78 (talk) 14:48, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
 * "There's lots of card-playing going on in the Super Furry Animals bus, which may have [had] a slight influence on the subject matter" - context needed; what's this bus you speak of? Done Cavie78 (talk) 11:12, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
 * It's not good to have the majority of a section taken up by a quote. Is there more information out there? Tidied up (all sources I can find simply repeat the same information) Cavie78 (talk) 14:23, 22 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Refs should be placed on top of some punctuation such as a comma or period. This is an issue in the Musical structure section.
 * ✅ re the refs Naerii 15:53, 21 July 2008 (UTC)
 * The question was answered here. —Giggy 00:59, 22 July 2008 (UTC)