Talk:Shuysky Tribute

Google translate cleanup needed
It should be heavily edited. Zezen (talk) 00:02, 2 November 2015 (UTC)

It's horrible. Mazarin07 (talk) 23:55, 19 February 2017 (UTC)

Big word order problems Elinruby (talk) 05:58, 21 July 2021 (UTC)


 * I am going to move the genealogy of the additional captive down out of the lead. Elinruby (talk) 06:04, 21 July 2021 (UTC)

The whole thing has gotten to the point that it needs an expert on the topic to go through and figure out what all the misphrased things mean. 73.254.192.168 (talk) 07:16, 1 October 2021 (UTC)

Identical captions
The first and second images have the same caption Elinruby (talk) 05:58, 21 July 2021 (UTC)


 * well, actually not any more because I reordered the clauses in one of them to at least make sense. Conceivably different paintings of the same subject by the same artist. Or some sort of cut and paste error, topic knowledge needed. Title of the respective works would be better. Elinruby (talk) 06:02, 21 July 2021 (UTC)

Needs rewriting
The English in this article is so bad as to occasionally be almost incomprehensible; It needs serious rewriting, especially given the importance of the subject. 79spirit (talk) 01:10, 11 June 2022 (UTC)