Talk:Sideshow Bob's Last Gleaming/GA1

GA Review
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Hey, I'm going to try and review this following the rules for GA reviews at Good Article criteria. I'll leave comments on my review as I go along, feel free to respond to my comments under each one and remember to sign each response. Rudy 21:21, 28 May 2009 (UTC)

At a glance

 * After a quick overview the article doesn't seem to fall into "quick-fail" criteria. Rudy 21:36, 28 May 2009 (UTC)

Coverage

 * Good standard coverage. Rudy 21:38, 28 May 2009 (UTC)

Structure

 * Fine. Rudy 21:39, 28 May 2009 (UTC)

Prose

 * Fantastic. The most well written article I've reviewed so far. Just a few very minor points but nothing like what I normally contend with, thank you! Rudy 01:08, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

Lead

 * Paragraph 1, line 5 - Typo, needs to be "He escapes while on work duty"
 * Para 2, ln 3 - Typo, "was left in the finished version"
 * Para 2, ln 3 - Typo/grammar - should be "It was the first episode of The Simpsons to be directed by Dominic Polcino, who described it as being very difficult to direct."

Production

 * Para 1, last line - Typo, "because much of the dialogue had to be re-written."

Images

 * Fine. Rudy 01:13, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

Links

 * Fine. Rudy 01:14, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

Lead

 * Perfect. Rudy 01:15, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

Conclusion
Excellent. Easiest review I've done. I want to get this passed now so I'm going to make the changes myself, they are only typos. Rudy 01:20, 29 May 2009 (UTC)

Verdict
PASSED. And then some. Rudy 01:24, 29 May 2009 (UTC)