Talk:Siege of Bergen op Zoom (1747)

Suggestions for improvement
I have assessed this article as meeting the Military history project's B class criteria. I have the following suggestions for further improvements:


 * expand the lead: currently it is just one sentence. Per WP:LEAD it can be up to four paragraphs long;
 * add ISBNs for the works in the Bibliography;
 * Done.
 * is there a need for a recommended reading section when the work appears to be listed already in the Bibliography?
 * Two different works, titles similar.
 * the works in the Bibliography may look better if they were formatted with the cite book template (this is not mandatory, however, and is just a suggestion);
 * currently the battle is only in one category, are there any more categories that it might be relevant to?
 * Done.
 * per Manual of Style (dates and numbers) the dates should not have ordinal suffixes. For instance "14th of July" should just be "14 July";
 * Done.
 * per WP:MOSTIME the times should have lower case "a.m." instead of upper case;
 * Done.
 * with the images, it might balance the article if they were spread a little more evenly through the article.

Anyway, good work so far and good luck with improving it further. Well done. AustralianRupert (talk) 07:36, 24 August 2010 (UTC)


 * Will work on others, thanks for the suggestions.Tttom1 (talk) 15:21, 24 August 2010 (UTC)