Talk:Siege of Fort William Henry/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: JonCatalán(Talk) 22:46, 7 October 2010 (UTC)

This is generally a very good article, and probably worthy of an A-class review. I really only have one comment:


 * You first write, "They took with them about 200 captives that Montcalm was powerless to recover." A paragraph later, you claim that, "[h]e managed to secure the release of about 500 captive..." I figure that some of those captives were unrelated to the siege of Fort William Henry. Maybe this should be made clear.
 * Those two bits have always niggled at me too; I've brought them together so that it's clearer what's going on. Thanks for your review.  Magic ♪piano 00:22, 8 October 2010 (UTC)

Otherwise, the article meets the GA-criteria. JonCatalán(Talk) 23:13, 7 October 2010 (UTC)