Talk:Siege of Kijevo/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 03:46, 25 November 2014 (UTC)

Thank you very much for taking time to review the article. I have tried to edit your suggestions into the article to improve it. I am also not too happy about the municipality source and have trimmed away all except one reference to it, establishing the time of arrival of the police to the village. I expect that the fact they had arrived there is non-controversial and the source is now used just to establish that point in the timeline, drawing no value judgments or analyses. If you prefer, that could also be removed without much harm to the article, but I think this particular instance does not reflect adversely on neutrality or reliability issues. Cheers.--Tomobe03 (talk) 20:44, 28 November 2014 (UTC)
 * That's reasonable. I need to have a closer look at the prose, but the article is in good shape. Regards, Peacemaker67 (crack... thump) 21:58, 28 November 2014 (UTC)