Talk:Siege of Lankaran/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: Unlimitedlead (talk · contribs) 20:51, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

Happy to work with you again. Will review over the next day(s). Unlimitedlead (talk) 20:51, 9 June 2023 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
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 * The caption of the lead image does not strike me as particularly meaningful, and I am not sure the formatting is correct either. I would recommended changing it to something like "History painting of the siege by Franz Roubaud, 1893. I also think it needs a US tag on Commons? Unlimitedlead (talk) 21:14, 9 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Hello UnlimatedLead - happy to work with you too. I've changed the caption to what you suggested . --HistoryofIran (talk) 00:14, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks. Anything on the US tag? Unlimitedlead (talk) 01:29, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Ops, added it now . --HistoryofIran (talk) 11:01, 10 June 2023 (UTC)

Unlimitedlead (talk) 14:50, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Why does the article refer to Qajar Iran both as Iranian and Persian? I would choose one for consistency.
 * "Shortly before the siege, Kotlyarevsky had offered the 4,000 soldiers and their commander Sadeq Khan Qajar...": You should clarify that these soldiers and the commander were occupying Lankaran.
 * "...and thus the Talysh Khanate was once again under Russian protection": The wording (both in the lead and in the body) is strange; I would reword to something similar to "...and the Talysh Khanate once again fell under Russian protection". Although, I do find the use of the word "protection" strange; should it not be "control" or "hegemony"?
 * Whenever a ruler is mentioned in the body, I would add a template.
 * "The khan of the Talysh Khanate, Mir-Mostafa Khan kept shifting his allegiance between Iran and Russia, which both the Iranian monarch Fath-Ali Shah Qajar and his designated heir Abbas Mirza had grown tired of": There are different verb tenses in this sentence, which is weird.
 * Think I addressed them all here (though not much I can do about the name of the infobox unfortunately) . Not sure if should be added for Mir-Mostafa Khan too? He was more of a governor than a traditional ruler. --HistoryofIran (talk) 23:00, 10 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Looks great. I will pass this GA nomination. Unlimitedlead (talk) 00:52, 11 June 2023 (UTC)
 * Awesome. Once again, thanks for the review and I'll see you around! HistoryofIran (talk) 01:02, 11 June 2023 (UTC)