Talk:Sierra Leone at the 2012 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 23W (talk · contribs) 07:19, 27 January 2015 (UTC)


 * GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

Nicely done. On hold for 14 days. 23W 04:22, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * The first sentence should be disemboldened (MOS:BOLDTITLE).
 * "No Sierra Leonean athlete has ever won a medal at the Olympics": would precede with an as of template.
 * "They both qualified after meeting the 'A' and 'B' qualifying standards": replace the single quote marks (') with doubles (").
 * "and was 0.18 metres behind a qualification spot and therefore, Sesay did not advance to the final": would rephrase as "and was 0.18 metres behind a qualification spot, therefore not advancing to the final" to be less redundant.
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * The first sentence should be disemboldened (MOS:BOLDTITLE).
 * "No Sierra Leonean athlete has ever won a medal at the Olympics": would precede with an as of template.
 * "They both qualified after meeting the 'A' and 'B' qualifying standards": replace the single quote marks (') with doubles (").
 * "and was 0.18 metres behind a qualification spot and therefore, Sesay did not advance to the final": would rephrase as "and was 0.18 metres behind a qualification spot, therefore not advancing to the final" to be less redundant.
 * "and was 0.18 metres behind a qualification spot and therefore, Sesay did not advance to the final": would rephrase as "and was 0.18 metres behind a qualification spot, therefore not advancing to the final" to be less redundant.
 * All ✅. Thanks for the review! good888 (talk) 08:42, 29 January 2015 (UTC)
 * You're welcome. Nice catch with the capitalization of summer in "Summer Olympics". Passing. 23W 02:17, 30 January 2015 (UTC)