Talk:Significant Other (album)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: What a pro. (talk · contribs) 02:32, 25 February 2012 (UTC)

Lead

 * The album sees the band... --> The album saw the band...
 * The second paragraph is one sentence long. Cut it off after "Limp Bizkit", remove the bands the collaborators are from, and combine the sentences with the first paragraph.
 * ...in which violence erupted... --> ...where violence erupted

Production

 * Put quotes around "Korn ripoff".
 * Unlink Terry Date.
 * Add 'guitarist' before Wes Borland.
 * ...take a break after the tour --> ...take a break after it.

Music and lyrics

 * No need for the border around the music sample.
 * Hip-hop origins? Was Limp Bizkit originally hip-hop?
 * Unlink Method Man.
 * ...also recorded with Eminem Recorded what?
 * Unlink Jonathan Davis, Scott Weiland, and Aaron Lewis.
 * ...and Durst's mother appeared in an interlude. Put in a separate sentence.
 * Again, no need for the border around the music sample.
 * In the sample caption, remove "from their second album Significant Other, which is excerpted here."
 * The last paragraph's sentences don't really have much connection with each other. Consider rewriting them.
 * Claypool states... --> Claypool stated...

Release and reception

 * Remove the info about the music videos, put it in the lead, or combine it with the prior section. It doesn't belong in a "reception" section.
 * Unlink Family Values Tour and Woodstock 1999.
 * No info about the total sales of the album?
 * Why is the controversy section in the release section?
 * ...awarded the album three and a half out of five stars. Did they say anything about the album?
 * Again, what did Martin Charles Strong say about the album?


 * Rolling Stone and Strong's book talk about the band in a biographical sense, not in relation to their albums. --WTF (talk) 13:50, 27 February 2012 (UTC)
 * Ah, okay. What a pro (talk, contribs) is on fire.  09:04, 28 February 2012 (UTC)

Track listing and Personnel sections
All good.

Charts

 * Cite all of the chart positions.
 * Add chart positions for the album worldwide.
 * Was the album certified gold anywhere? If so, add it here.
 * You focus too much on the Billboard charts here. Add more worldwide charts, drop some of the Billboard ones.