Talk:Simeon Willis/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer:

A few comments: Congratulations with a good article. I fixed up all the small stuff I found. Otherwise a interesting, concise and well-written article. Arsenikk (talk)  20:38, 22 October 2009 (UTC)
 * As almost all American editors, you forget to instate 'United States' to establish context.
 * If there is a two-step place or date, such as "Lawrence County, Ohio", or "April 1, 1965", remember to stick a comma afterwards (unless there is a period there).
 * MOS says to not super-text "th".
 * Personally I would not have re-linked "Republican" and "Kentucky Court of Appeals" in the text (since it is wikilinked in the lead), but I guess this could be optional.
 * Personally I would have differentiated the two Klotter books by their year of publishing, not by title, in the notes—I must admit that I have never come across this that I can remember, but I do not read much American academic history literature.
 * When using a dash to say "against", use an endash, not an emdash.