Talk:Simp/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 17:55, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 17:55, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Basic stuff and comments

 * Try moving references in the lead to the body of the article.
 * The references in the lead are there because the statements in it have been challenged before; I expect they would be again challenged if the references were removed. jp×g 20:12, 31 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a serial comma after "e-girls".
 * ✅ Done. jp×g 20:08, 31 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Add a comma after the first use of "Too Short".
 * ✅ Done. jp×g 20:08, 31 March 2021 (UTC)


 * What could possibly help readers in describing "Mr. Simp Sexual"?
 * The term is usually employed (at least in memes) alongside a sort of character vignette, whose description is otherwise lacking from the article. I chose this one since it's not just a random post, it's a post that is deliberately included as an exemplar of the archetype in an article from a reliable source. jp×g 20:12, 31 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "described use of" "described the use of"
 * ✅ Done. jp×g 20:08, 31 March 2021 (UTC)


 * Remove the comma after "written on it".
 * This one I have a minor objection to, since the sentence is extremely long and has multiple clauses in it. I will still do it if you are totally certain that it should be that way. jp×g 20:07, 31 March 2021 (UTC)


 * "time of announcement" "time of the announcement"
 * ✅ Done. jp×g 20:12, 31 March 2021 (UTC)


 * References are already archived.
 * Optional, but linking sources through "|website=" helps readers.
 * You mean wikilinks? Sure, I'll take a stab at it. jp×g 20:13, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
 * ✅ Done (linked on the first occurrence of the publication name in a reference, and in plain text afterwards. jp×g 20:16, 31 March 2021 (UTC)
 * Oh, hell, the references don't appear in the same order as in the source code. I can try to fix that if you want. jp×g 20:17, 31 March 2021 (UTC)

Progress
Modifications have been made, what do you think? jp×g 20:18, 31 March 2021 (UTC)