Talk:Simpson and Delilah/GA1

GA Review
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Comments
This is a nice article. There are some things which need to be done to improve it, I think.


 * 1) The lead does not summarize the episode properly. It only tells half the story.
 * 2) Everything in the production section should have a reference. The first sentence does not. Please make sure it's all covered.
 * 3) What channel was The Cosby Show on? It might be good to mention it to compare.
 * 4) Make sure everything in the Reception section is sourced properly.
 * 5) Is it worth giving Cultural references its own section?
 * 6) Is the picture of Karl really needed?

Just some thoughts. Howdoyouturnthison (talk) 00:27, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * (P.S. this is not actually a review - I'm a little inexperienced to be doing that yet.) Howdoyouturnthison (talk) 01:19, 31 July 2008 (UTC)


 * OK nevermind, Peanut4 listed me as reviewer... Howdoyouturnthison (talk) 12:26, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Hi there, thanks for the review. I did not take care of your comment #1 because per WP:LEAD and WP:EPISODE. If the lead summarized the whole plot, there wouldn't be much a point of reading the plot. I added a reference (taking care of #2.) A channel may differ worldwide. It's noted that it is on FOX, so I didn't take care of your comment #3. Comment #4 is done. There should be a separate section for Cultural reference per WP:EPISODE. Lastly, the image of Karl would provide the reader(s) with a better view. In BBC's view: "[The] episode is brought to life by the superb character of Karl..." Thanks again for the review! « Milk's Favorite Cøøkie  13:58, 31 July 2008 (UTC)


 * You haven't said what channel the Cosby show is on. Simpsons was on Fox, but what was the Cosby show on? Howdoyouturnthison (talk) 14:03, 31 July 2008 (UTC)
 * Whoops. Done. Thanks, « Milk's Favorite Cøøkie  14:56, 31 July 2008 (UTC)