Talk:Sinéad Griffin

This article is written like an advertisement and needs to be written in a neutral tone — Preceding unsigned comment added by QuantumJIM1994 (talk • contribs) 18:56, 8 August 2023 (UTC) --QuantumJIM1994 (talk) 21:14, 8 August 2023 (UTC)


 * As it currently stands, it does not read like an advertisement to me. Have recent edits improved it adequately that this tag can now be removed? If not, is there something in particular you are unhappy about as it reads fine to me at the moment.138.38.93.48 (talk) 138.38.93.48 (talk) 22:54, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

inappropriate links?
The sentence about the person's art work was linked to references that were either out of date or were sales sites. I believe these are inappropriate by wikipedia standards, and removed those. Having done that, I think that the rest of the article has no inappropriate links, so that comment should be removed at this point. Scientist999 (talk) 19:57, 3 August 2023 (UTC)