Talk:Sir Bevil Grenville's Monument/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 10:54, 1 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Grabbing this one for a review shortly. Miyagawa (talk) 10:54, 1 March 2015 (UTC)

Ok, review time.


 * Lead: Swap around cites 3 and 2 so that they're in the correct numerical order.
 * Done.&mdash; Rod talk 20:43, 1 March 2015 (UTC)


 * History: As with the other article, move citations to after the following punctuation mark for cleanliness.
 * As before done where a cite only covers one fact in the sentence but moved now


 * Typo in the last sentence of the section: "rapairs" - "repairs"
 * Done.&mdash; Rod talk 20:43, 1 March 2015 (UTC)


 * "funded by Granvilles descendants" = "funded by Granville's descendants"?
 * Thanks - I'm always being criticised for apostrophe abuse.&mdash; Rod talk 20:43, 1 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Description: Link English Baroque
 * Done.&mdash; Rod talk 20:43, 1 March 2015 (UTC)


 * "Battle of Lansdowne(1643)" - needs a space between Lansdowne and (1643)
 * Done.&mdash; Rod talk 20:43, 1 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Background - I'd move this section up above History, as it'll be the first thing to occur in the timeline.
 * Moved.&mdash; Rod talk 20:43, 1 March 2015 (UTC)

Once you've dealt with those, I'll take another look. Miyagawa (talk) 20:33, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Thanks again.&mdash; Rod talk 20:43, 1 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Great, happy to promote this one too. Miyagawa (talk) 22:48, 1 March 2015 (UTC)