Talk:Sir Henry Slingsby, 1st Baronet

B class review
This is B class except for a few issues. The first two bullets below are the most critical. Please fix. Thanks. Djmaschek (talk) 05:23, 13 January 2021 (UTC)
 * This line in the introduction needs a citation: "His ‘Memoirs’, covering the years 1638 to 1648, were first published in 1806 and are a valuable first-hand source for the civil war period in northern England."
 * His wife's maiden name is spelled one way in the text and another way in the infobox.
 * The Baronets of Nova Scotia succession box is at the end, but there is no mention in the article. The Nova Scotia baronetage list in the linked article does not appear to have the Slingsby baronetage. I'm not sure if this is important or not.
 * Please consider dividing Career into 2 or 3 sections. (for example: Early career, Civil War, Confiscation and execution) Djmaschek (talk) 05:23, 13 January 2021 (UTC)


 * Citation added.
 * Spelling made consistent.
 * Purchase of barony is mentioned in second paragraph; I'm not sure the Nova Scotia list is complete but not really a big/important issue for me (might be for someone who enjoys chasing down titles :));
 * Split into two sections as suggested. Thanks. Robinvp11 (talk) 18:49, 18 January 2021 (UTC)


 * This is assessed as B class. Djmaschek (talk) 21:32, 27 January 2021 (UTC)