Talk:Sisters Minor of Mary Immaculate

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I did a Google search on the religious congregation and see some material to put together an encyclopediac, NPOV article.

To the person who started this article: Hi. I see you are a new user. It's great that you are contributing to Wikipedia, and I'm glad we can work together to create a good encyclopedia article on this religious congregation.

You are new to Wikipedia, so you may be unfamiliar with all of our policies and guidelines. Some of the more experienced users know more about these policies and guidelines and can help you in writing this article.

One of these things is that articles have to have references. If you do it in the proper manner, it is fine to say that this order is "abusive physically, spiritually, and mentally, and sexually", as well as neglectful. But we are writing an encyclopedia article here, so we have to keep that in mind. Let's say you know of a newspaper or magazine article that talks about how this religious congregation is mentally abusive as well as neglectful. Then you should tell us about it. Then the article can say "According to So-and-so Magazine, the Sisters are mentally abusive as well as neglectful. One example the magazine article gives is John Doe and Jane Doe, who were mentally abused and neglected by the Sisters". Actually, even what I just wrote is not the best example, the best thing is to give examples. Like to note exactly what the mentally abusive and neglectful things happened to John and/or Jane Doe that was mentioned in the magazine article.

So that's just an example of how we can build a better article. Let's work together to do this. For now, let's leave the initial content you put up in the discussion page. Mr. Know-It-All 02:06, 13 August 2005 (UTC)